#Shechem said to her father

"Shechem said to Dinah's father Jacob"

#Let me find favor in your eyes, and whatever you tell me I will give

Here "eyes" stands for a person's thoughts or opinion. AT: "If you will be kind and agree with me, then I will give you whatever you ask" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_metonymy]])

#bride price

In some cultures, it is customary for a man to give money, property, cattle, and other gifts to the bride's family at the time of marriage.

#The sons of Jacob answered Shechem and Hamor his father with deceit

The abstract noun "deceit" can be stated as the verb "lied." AT: "But the sons of Jacob lied to Shechem and Hamor when they answered them" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_abstractnouns]])

#Shechem had defiled Dinah

See how you translated "defiled" in [[:en:bible:notes:gen:34:04|34:5]].