#Hamor ... went out to Jacob

"Hamor ... went to meet Jacob"

#The men were offended

"The men were outraged"

#They were very angry ... should not have been done

As in the UDB,this can be stated as a direct quotation spoken by Jacob's sons. (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_quotations]])

#he had disgraced Israel

Here the word "Israel" refers to every member of Jacob's family. Israel as a people group was disgraced. AT: "he had humiliated the family of Israel" or "he had brought shame on the people of Israel" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_metonymy]])

#forcing himself on Jacob's daughter

See how you translated similar phrases in [[:en:bible:notes:gen:34:01|34:2]].

#for such a thing should not have been done

This can be stated in active form. AT: "for he should not have done such a terrible thing" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_activepassive]])