#My master knows

This is a polite and formal way of referring to Esau. AT: "You, my master, know" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_123person]])

#the children are young

The meaning can be stated more explicitly. AT: "the children are too young to travel fast" (See: [[:en:ta:vol1:translate:figs_explicit]])

#If they are driven hard even one day

This can be stated in active form. AT: "If we force them to go too fast even for one day" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_activepassive]])

#Please let my master go on ahead of his servant

This is a polite and formal way of Jacob referring to himself. AT: "My lord, I am your servant. Please go ahead of me" (See: [[:en:ta:vol2:translate:figs_123person]])

#at the pace of the livestock that are before me

"at the speed the animals I am looking after can go"

#Seir

See how you translated this in [[:en:bible:notes:gen:32:03|32:3]].