INDIFFERENCE DEFINITION:A state of apathy, casualness, or disinterest PHYSICAL SIGNALS AND BEHAVIORS: Shoulders are lowered and loose A slow, steady gait Arms hanging limply at the sides Shrugging half-heartedly Long pauses before responding Staring blankly or emotionlessly Lifting a hand loosely, palm up, in aWho cares?gesture Placing hands in one’s pockets Leaning back or away Looking sleepy or glazed Speaking in a flat voice Smiling politely, not genuinely The body sagging while seated, lacking tension A wandering gaze Picking at lint, scratching at cuticles, etc., to show that interest is lacking Closing one’s eyes to shut everything out Texting during an event or while someone speaks Not bothering to answer someone’s questions Being unresponsive during a group discussion or debate Ignoring something being handed over (a file, business card, etc.) Turning away A nonchalant attitude Speaking only when one is spoken to Not responding to jokes or personal exchanges Pointedly ignoring another person or situation that draws others in Relaxed posture An unhurried exit Focusing on one’s shoe, scuffing at the ground, etc., rather than giving due attention Responding withWhateverorSo? Randomly changing the topic Yawning Mimicking boredom (slumping in one’s seat, tapping a pencil, etc.) Half-lidded eyes MutteringUh-huhorYeahwhen it seems appropriate Being easily distracted by other things (TV, a girl walking past, etc.) Choosing brainless activities to pass the time (TV bingeing, scrolling through memes, etc.) INTERNAL SENSATIONS: A lack of energy Slow, even breaths MENTAL RESPONSES: Zoning or tuning others out to concentrate on other things Wandering thoughts A lack of empathy Thinking about the time or future events ACUTE OR LONG-TERM RESPONSES FOR THIS EMOTION: A disconnect with one’s life or society A fading sense of empathy Falling into a routine Meaningless interaction with others Finding little day-to-day joy Ignoring the pain or suffering of others SIGNS THAT THIS EMOTION IS BEING SUPPRESSED: Smiling and pretending to pay attention Nodding along as someone speaks but not actively listening Asking a few token questions Making an excuse to leave MAY ESCALATE TO:Irritation,Annoyance,Contempt,Resignation,Curiosity,Concern,Discouraged MAY DE-ESCALATE TO:Validated ASSOCIATED POWER VERBS: Detach, dismiss, disregard, drift flop, forget, glaze, hunch ignore, loll, neglect, plod sag, shrug, slack, slouch slump, snub, stare, wander WRITER’S TIP:To create a fluid, emotional arc in your story, make sure your character’s feelings build in intensity and complexity as the novel progresses.