HEAT DEFINITION: exposure to elevated external temperatures that cause one’s internal temperature to rise PHYSICAL SIGNALS: Flushed skin Sweat Chapped lips Squinting or closing one’s eyes Fanning oneself with a hat or book Peeling off excess clothing Rolling up pants and long sleeves Splotchy skin Flapping the front of one’s shirt to cool the body Weakened steps Arms hanging limply at one’s sides Shuffling Swaying on one’s feet Walking with an unsteady gait Panting or wheezing Fainting Turning toward even the faintest of breezes Heat rash A puffy look Large sweat patches on one’s clothing Increased body odor Sunburn Swollen feet and ankles Eyes that appear sunken Peeling skin A lack of coordination Falling down Sweat-darkened hair Frizzy hair (if humidity is a factor) Blotting at the face and neck with a towel or tissue Shielding one’s head with whatever is at hand INTERNAL SENSATIONS: A dry or sticky mouth Hot skin A tongue that feels swollen Blurred vision Blood pounding in the skull Lightheadedness and dizziness Nausea and vomiting Muscle weakness Muscle cramps and spasms Headaches Lethargy Excessive thirst Rapid heartbeat Fatigue Muscles that feel weighted MENTAL RESPONSES: Confusion Irritability An inability to think clearly Lack of focus Fantasizing about water Single-minded focus on finding shade or a reprieve from the heat CUES OF ACUTE OR LONG-TERM HEAT: Elevated body temperature Stripping down; ceasing to care about appearance or modesty Hostility or rage Impaired decision-making Skin that ceases to sweat Dark-colored urine Hallucinations Seizures Brain damage Loss of consciousness Death WRITER’S TIP:Heat is a natural amplifier, the perfect catalyst for pushing ordinary people to anger and violence. But characters and readers need a respite from the heat every once in awhile. Give them a break periodically by providing relief, a chance to rest and recharge so they’re better able to jump back into battle when the temperature rises again.