## 【润色后作文（基本款）】

<p style="text-indent: 2em;">Just then, Grace appeared. The family<span style="color: blue;">【's】</span> heart<span style="color: blue;">【s】</span> <del style="color: red;">jolted</del><span style="color: blue;">【jolted】</span> when <del style="color: red;">he</del><span style="color: blue;">【they】</span> saw Grace. Grace <del style="color: red;">tightening she's face</del><span style="color: blue;">【tightened her face】</span>. And Grace <del style="color: red;">listens</del><span style="color: blue;">【listened】</span> to what <del style="color: red;">happen</del><span style="color: blue;">【had happened】</span>, <del style="color: red;">she make up her mind</del><span style="color: blue;">【and made up her mind】</span> to help <del style="color: red;">for</del> the family to sell <del style="color: red;">of</del> rose soap. Grace <del style="color: red;">put up</del><span style="color: blue;">【picked up】</span> <del style="color: red;">rose soap</del><span style="color: blue;">【a bar of rose soap】</span> and <del style="color: red;">sniffing</del><span style="color: blue;">【sniffed】</span>. All the people opened their eyes wide, waiting for Grace to <del style="color: red;">how to say</del><span style="color: blue;">【what to say】</span> about <del style="color: red;">rose soap</del><span style="color: blue;">【the rose soap】</span>. Grace <del style="color: red;">look</del><span style="color: blue;">【looked at】</span> <del style="color: red;">the rose soap and see</del><span style="color: blue;">【the rose soap and said】</span>, "<del style="color: red;">I agreed</del><span style="color: blue;">【I agree】</span> that it was the most <del style="color: red;">awsome</del><span style="color: blue;">【awesome】</span> soap I had ever <del style="color: red;">see</del><span style="color: blue;">【seen】</span>. <del style="color: red;">Rose Soap sniffing and look like is the best</del><span style="color: blue;">【This rose soap smells amazing and is the best】</span>. I think we should buy a piece of soap."</p>
<p style="text-indent: 2em;">Soon, the soap tower was sold out. <del style="color: red;">The guril' s and her marga</del><span style="color: blue;">【The little girl and her mother】</span> <del style="color: red;">buy</del><span style="color: blue;">【bought】</span> a lot of rose soap. The family <del style="color: red;">very thankful for</del><span style="color: blue;">【was very thankful to】</span> Grace. Grace <del style="color: red;">buried in their thank</del><span style="color: blue;">【was buried in their thanks】</span>, <del style="color: red;">she is delighted</del><span style="color: blue;">【and she was delighted】</span>. Her eyes <del style="color: red;">not like a stone</del><span style="color: blue;">【were not like stones】</span>, instead <del style="color: red;">shin</del><span style="color: blue;">【shining】</span> with excitement.</p>